Narrative Writing
Descriptive Writing
We had a go at writing similes. Here are some of the cute results!
My Dad is as fun as an iPad. Luke
My Dad is as clever as a cheetah. My Dad is as funny as a clown. Saskia
My Dad is as clever as a mouse. My Dad is as funny as a feather tickling. Kaelan
My Dad is as fun as an iPad. Luke
My Dad is as clever as a cheetah. My Dad is as funny as a clown. Saskia
My Dad is as clever as a mouse. My Dad is as funny as a feather tickling. Kaelan
Amazing Adjectives
We wrote adjectives to describe ourselves. Next we moved around the room and added adjectives to everyone else's sheet.
Wonderful Writing
We are writing descriptions. Check out some of our clever writers!
My Monkey.
My monkey lives in the forest. His tongue is out all the time. His eyes are cute with sparkles in his eyes. He has light brown fur too. He likes cuddles too. - Bethan
My monkey lives in the forest. His tongue is out all the time. His eyes are cute with sparkles in his eyes. He has light brown fur too. He likes cuddles too. - Bethan
The Monster
My monster has twinkling eyes. He is blue and pink. I give him treats and I give him cuddles. He is soft. Goodnight. I love you. - Amelia
My Cute Monkey
My monkey lives in the jungle and he's so cute and he eats bananas. He is light brown and he has twinkling eyes. - Amelie
My Monster
My monster is scary. His eyes are poking out! He eats people in blood sauce and lions manes. He has a long tail 300km up. I was looking in a magnifying glass at my monsters tail. - Alex
The Monster
The monster has got really sharp teeth and he eats people. He catches hail. He's black like Darth Vadar. - Vienna
My monster has twinkling eyes. He is blue and pink. I give him treats and I give him cuddles. He is soft. Goodnight. I love you. - Amelia
My Cute Monkey
My monkey lives in the jungle and he's so cute and he eats bananas. He is light brown and he has twinkling eyes. - Amelie
My Monster
My monster is scary. His eyes are poking out! He eats people in blood sauce and lions manes. He has a long tail 300km up. I was looking in a magnifying glass at my monsters tail. - Alex
The Monster
The monster has got really sharp teeth and he eats people. He catches hail. He's black like Darth Vadar. - Vienna
Can you guess which monster we wrote about?
My monster has two horns and he is orange. he has a yellow tummy. He is waving. He has two teeth.
Felix
My monster is pink and purple and it's teeth are sticking out.
Chloe
The orange monster has two eyes that are skinny and are on top of his head.
Joshua
My monster is orange. His eyes are sticking out. He has no arms.
Ashton
The monster has horns and one eye and sharp claws and purple skin.
Toby
My monster has big and medium and little hair and has skin and he has two teeth.
Sophia
The monster has horns and it has claws. It has one eye. It has sharp teeth. The monster is scary.
Rowan
My monster is yellow and has a pink tongue.
Emily
I am a monster and I am pink. My friend is orange. Her teeth are pointy.
Kirsten
My monster is helping his friends and he got his lolly. He is yellow.
Ava
I am a monster and I am pink with orange. My friend and I are playing.
Macy
It has blue eyes and orange teeth and a pink tongue. the eyes are on top of its head.
Uenuku.
The monster has horns and one eye, sharp claws and purl skin.
Toby D
My monster has big and medium and little hair and has skin and he has two teeth.
Sophia
The monster has horns and it has claws. It has one eye. It has sharp teeth. The monster is scary.
Rowan
The monster is pink and it has two feet.
Patrick
My monster is purple and she is square it has dark hair.
Austin.
My monster has two horns and he is orange. he has a yellow tummy. He is waving. He has two teeth.
Felix
My monster is pink and purple and it's teeth are sticking out.
Chloe
The orange monster has two eyes that are skinny and are on top of his head.
Joshua
My monster is orange. His eyes are sticking out. He has no arms.
Ashton
The monster has horns and one eye and sharp claws and purple skin.
Toby
My monster has big and medium and little hair and has skin and he has two teeth.
Sophia
The monster has horns and it has claws. It has one eye. It has sharp teeth. The monster is scary.
Rowan
My monster is yellow and has a pink tongue.
Emily
I am a monster and I am pink. My friend is orange. Her teeth are pointy.
Kirsten
My monster is helping his friends and he got his lolly. He is yellow.
Ava
I am a monster and I am pink with orange. My friend and I are playing.
Macy
It has blue eyes and orange teeth and a pink tongue. the eyes are on top of its head.
Uenuku.
The monster has horns and one eye, sharp claws and purl skin.
Toby D
My monster has big and medium and little hair and has skin and he has two teeth.
Sophia
The monster has horns and it has claws. It has one eye. It has sharp teeth. The monster is scary.
Rowan
The monster is pink and it has two feet.
Patrick
My monster is purple and she is square it has dark hair.
Austin.